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Name: Jyoti
From: Ludhiana, Punjab, India
About me: painting the ideas on canvas, sharing views through poems, embriodery on cloth with different threads, sometimes short tempered, very talkative, quite ambitious, like to dream high, love to read about different people...in short a a girl with a broad smile who is passionate to live a life with a difference.
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Sunday, April 15, 2007

Nayee Aashayein

nayee aashayein hai, hai kuch umeedein nayi
har din mein bhara hai ek rang naya
chal padi hun apne sapno ki gathari le kar
rakh liya saath mein vishwash ko bun kar

haunsalon ka chota sa diya lekar
badhi hun aage chunkar ek dagar
doori manzil ki mein jaanti nahin
kya paunch paungi wahan, sochti hun aksar

dagmagate kadamon ko rakha hai ek oor
thame apno ka haath,pakade nishtha ki dor

jut gayi hun mein firse bunane ek tana bana
dekahte hai kahan ja kar poori hoti hai
zindagi ko jee lene ki tammana.....

posted by Jyoti at 7:25 AM

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15 Comments:

At April 15, 2007 at 8:47 PM, Ye manzilen !!

J,
Wah, Khoob - Kavitaayen to bahut acchi hain!! Kis ki hain ye nai batayaa?
At April 16, 2007 at 7:53 AM, Jyoti

@ ye manzile:thank u so much..aap mera profile dekh sakte hain
jaan jayenge
At April 16, 2007 at 11:18 PM, Deepak

nice yaar !!!!!!
ye life ki reality hai... puri jindgi tane-bane pe hi chalti hai.... sapne dekho ,pura karne ki koshish karo aur tab tak karo jab tak ummid hai...

"dagmagate kadamon ko rakha hai ek oor
thame apno ka haath,pakade nishtha ki dor..."

its true apno ka saath ho to jindgi jitne ki aas hai.....:)
At April 16, 2007 at 11:59 PM, Anonymous

@deepak: thanks a lot dear!!!
At April 17, 2007 at 4:43 AM, Ye manzilen !!

Woh jo apna hai
wohi to sapna hai!

Arre wah kavitri aap khud...good works. Ustad kehte hain ke "dil se baat nikalti hai, asar rakhti hai!"

great.....
At April 18, 2007 at 6:43 AM, D

Well put! Speaks a great deal about your forward looking attitude in life...
At April 18, 2007 at 8:39 AM, Anonymous

@me: thanks devanshi!!!
At April 21, 2007 at 7:39 AM, Dhruva

You're a good poet.And I like the picture in your blog.
At April 22, 2007 at 5:58 AM, Amandeep Singh

Nice..
Just keep that vishwas and that haunsala..and I bet u gonna live the life to the fullest..
nice one really!!!
At April 22, 2007 at 8:22 AM, Jyoti

@dhruva: thanks a lot!!!
@standbymind:shukriya apki bahumulya haunsla afzai ke liye
At April 24, 2007 at 1:58 AM, Anonymous

Hi Jyoti,

Your grasp over words and flow is just amazing. The optimist in you has wonderfully come out in the form of these lines.

All the best and keep on giving the best for your Aashayein and Umeedein.

Awestruck Admirer
At April 24, 2007 at 8:34 AM, Jyoti

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At April 24, 2007 at 10:15 PM, Jyoti

@anonymous:Its my honour sir tht u took out time for my blog!! Thank u so much
At April 25, 2007 at 5:23 AM, Anonymous

:-)... The positivity never fails you. keep it up.
hugs and cares! D
At June 24, 2007 at 2:56 AM, faith

dagmagate kadamon ko rakha hai ek oor
thame apno ka haath,pakade nishtha ki dor

*smiles*