Wednesday, February 27, 2008
....yeh Aansu

kai dino ke baad kal raat fir ansu laute
in ankhon mein,
hai bechare dukh ke bindu
is baar khushi jhalka rahe the kintu

jab na ho bayan khushi labon se
tab shayad ankhen hi keh deti hai
apne hi ek anokhe andaz mein
sirf dukh nahi...
kabhi kabhi palon ki
khushi bhi bayan karate hai yeh AAnsu...!!
 
posted by Jyoti at 5:27 AM ¤ Permalink ¤


8 Comments:


  • At February 27, 2008 9:08 AM, Blogger story teller

    you written so well and true.
    hamesha saath hote ye aansu....but kash eske koi rang hote taki log dekh ke keh pate ki ya khushi ke hai ya gam ke.... :)
    Waise its good ki aapko itni khushi mili.. :)

    thnx for stopping by at my blog.

     
  • At February 27, 2008 8:31 PM, Blogger dEEPs

    To ye baat hai.. :)
    pure 2 month ke baad ye post..wahi to sonchu ki where u lost...ab samjha khushi collect kr rahi thi... :)

    M happy that aapko itni khush mili.
    thori khushi dosto main bhi distribute kar digye...:)

    anyways ye kimti moti sambhal ke rakhiye aage kaam aayenge.. kabhi khushi deekhane to kabhi kisi ko satane ke...... :P

     
  • At March 2, 2008 8:59 AM, Blogger gunj

    jus two words....wah wah :)

     
  • At March 4, 2008 10:22 AM, Blogger Standbymind

    wah wah...
    kya khoobsurat shabdo mein likhti hain aaap!!

    :)

     
  • At March 4, 2008 10:39 AM, Blogger *~*Sameera*~*

    That was beautiful!Very deep and touching.Keep it up :)

     
  • At March 9, 2008 6:14 PM, Blogger Dawn....सेहर

    Aansu ek eisee cheez hai jo acche aur bure dono waqt saath deti hein :)
    bahut khoob hamari taraf se daad kabool karein
    aur likhte rahein

    Cheers

     
  • At March 23, 2008 1:00 PM, Blogger divya

    i have so much to say about tears..kash main bhi likh pati hindi poetry :P

     
  • At March 25, 2008 3:46 AM, Blogger Jyoti

    @ story teller: My pleasure sir!

    @deeps: kisi ko satane ke liye..kya matlab grrr?

    @gunj: Shukriya shukriya

    @standbymind,@sameera,@dawn,: thanks

    @divya..zarur likh sakti ho..try kar ke to dekho