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Name: Jyoti
From: Ludhiana, Punjab, India
About me: painting the ideas on canvas, sharing views through poems, embriodery on cloth with different threads, sometimes short tempered, very talkative, quite ambitious, like to dream high, love to read about different people...in short a a girl with a broad smile who is passionate to live a life with a difference.
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Alok
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Friday, September 7, 2007

bin tere kaise jiyu??

dekha hai uski nigohon mein

jana hai khud ko uski saanso mein

kashish hai uski bahon mein

jhalakata hai bahut sara pyar uski baaton mein

ajeeb si halchal si ho rahi hai

na jane kyun khud se hi ek muhabbat si ho rahi hai....

har waqt hai ab khayal uska

ab to har dhadkan pe hai naam uska

aaya tha ek dost bankar,

reh gaya ab woh naseeb bankar,

kis khuda, kis ishwar ki mein shukar manau

jo lekar aaya us fariste ko zindagi mein

jiske bina to ab mein jee bhi na pau..........!

posted by Jyoti at 11:06 AM

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53 Comments:

At September 9, 2007 at 1:11 PM, Ye manzilen !!

HAQ HAI SAAB.....Ise kehte ian danke ki chot pe mahobbat...
:)
I am happy for u...khuh raho aur KHUSH RAKHO !!!
At September 9, 2007 at 8:34 PM, hope

oho to ye baat hai...

kya baat hai... CONGRATS.. *smiles*
At September 9, 2007 at 8:45 PM, Deepak

MUBARAK ho ji !! :)
tabhi to kahu " es sar pe kiska jadu chal raha hai"... :P

"Khushi kabhi kam na ho"
At September 9, 2007 at 11:03 PM, Winged Fantasy

aaye haye.... sadke jaawan main. :D

arre mohtarma...

Bas yahi toh ishq ka noor hai...
Ishq ki manzil bhale hi door hai...
Par, jo ho agar dil mein kashish,
Saanson mein bheeni si tishnagi...
Woh ishq paata manzil zaroor hai...

:-) Mubarakaan!!!
nazar naa lage! :-) All the very best! :-)
At September 10, 2007 at 9:01 AM, Jyoti

@Ye manzilen!!: Thank you so much for being there!

@hope: *blush*

@Deepak:shukriya janab!

@Meenakshi:tuhada bot bot dhannvad madamji!
At September 10, 2007 at 9:46 AM, Alok

u love him so deeply ... so well expressed

alok
At September 10, 2007 at 9:55 AM, Impressionist

so this is his pic?
u 2 make a great pair! ;)
:D congrats!

peace & love
Jeevy
At September 11, 2007 at 11:07 PM, The Furobiker

mubarak ho..!
shaadi ka card zaroor bhejna :)
At September 11, 2007 at 11:52 PM, Rakesh

Pyari aur bahut pyari bhavnaayein...
At September 12, 2007 at 12:26 AM, Sam!!

Beautiful words...

I just loved your poetry here.

Nice blog besides :)

Hope to see you around dear.

Take care
At September 14, 2007 at 3:19 AM, Ali S.

Subhaan allah......
...bahut behatareen lafzoon ka upyoog kiya hai kissi ke prati apni chaahat darshaane ke liye......izhaare mohobbat koi seekhe to tumse seekhein....warna izhaar karna hi chor de......[:)]

read ur profile...if its true....i'll say "nice to learn bout you"....else....."chand dino ki chaandni phir andheeri raat"

Thnx for dropping by my blog...
At September 14, 2007 at 3:42 AM, The Bhandari's

awww thats cute...
all the best :)

Thanks for dropping by my blog
love
~preeti
At September 15, 2007 at 2:37 PM, Tejas

Amazing poem. May you stay happy :)
At September 15, 2007 at 9:48 PM, Anonymous

Changi poem he ji. Vahut hi Vadiya !!

sadda dil khush ho gaya is poem nu padh ke.

You hv got a great blog full of wonderful poems!!!

Keep rocking

Thanks for droppin by my blog.
At September 16, 2007 at 1:30 AM, relations

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At September 16, 2007 at 1:32 AM, relations

hey..

awesome blog..full of so positivity and romance..

loved the concluding lines..kis khuda ka shukr manaoo..
love is indeed so innocent..

do write in punjabi sometime..
At September 16, 2007 at 9:31 AM, Ahmed

Your poems are really sweet. I spent time reading your poems. Keep posting and improving!
At September 16, 2007 at 9:05 PM, Jyoti

@alok:yes, i do love him..may be more than what i can express!

@rajeev: Ya..its his pic..thanks

@abhishek: Surely, why not..family ke saath aana!

@rakesh:Thank uuuuuu!
At September 16, 2007 at 9:11 PM, Jyoti

@samrina:Thanks a lot samrina for stopping by here!

@ashish: Muhabbat ka maza hi izhaar mein hota hai! Thanks for taking out time for my blog!wahan sab kuch 100% sach likha hai..:)

@the bhandari's:Thanks dear

@tejas:you really liked it?

@ashu: bot bot dhannvad tuhada ki tusi ethe aaye!hun taan aapan milde hi ravange blog te. bahut changa lagaya..punjabi cha comment padh ke!
At September 16, 2007 at 9:14 PM, Jyoti

@relations:thanks a lot..."love is really innocent" worth enough to get crazy.

@shayari:Thanks a lot for giving your precious time..shukriya is zarranawazi ke liye!
At September 16, 2007 at 9:17 PM, Impressionist

Oye madam!
where have u disappeared?
remember me?? :>

peace & love
Jeevy
At September 16, 2007 at 9:19 PM, Jyoti

@rajeev: do you think i can ever forget you??? We will be meeting this week surely..before leaving for delhi!
At September 16, 2007 at 9:25 PM, Impressionist

nopes!
not yet! :(
ur leaving to delhi!?!? oh good! :D
u got the job there??
At September 16, 2007 at 10:07 PM, Dawn

wah mohabbat ka ek aur roop zhankta hua...bahut khoob
Cheers
At September 17, 2007 at 2:23 AM, My travel dairy

CONGRATS!
Thats so beautiful expression of love.
Keep smiling, be happy always.
Thanks for dropping by my blog.
At September 17, 2007 at 9:05 AM, Arti Honrao

Good One!

Best wishes :)

GBU
Arti
At September 17, 2007 at 10:12 AM, Ahmed

I like the layout of your page!
I have invited you to my orkut community so that you can join my social worker and activist community.Poets and artists are people of heart. I need your arm-chair cooperation very much!
Thanks
At September 18, 2007 at 4:57 AM, KP

Best Wishes...:)
At September 18, 2007 at 5:27 AM, oomi

thanx dear for your kind comment
At September 19, 2007 at 7:00 AM, Raghu Ram Prasad

koun hai woh ....kismatwala....joyti "you are wonder"
At September 19, 2007 at 11:36 AM, Lakshmi

simple and yet beautiful words...I can see you are very happy :)
At September 19, 2007 at 7:07 PM, Jyoti

@Raghu Ram Prasad:Oh! itna bada jhooth..! aur shukriya..aap aaye to sahi yahan!

@backpakker:Yeah, you are right..I am very very very happy. Thanks!
At September 20, 2007 at 1:54 AM, Anonymous

Soniyo tussi kithe gayab ho gaye ? Hun tainu sadda blog vich kab aawange ?
At September 20, 2007 at 10:29 AM, Prabhjeet Singh

Teri yaad se gaafil jo kabhi ho jaunga,
Dekh lena main zameen oadh ke so jaunga.

NICE Blog....! Keep it up.
At September 20, 2007 at 3:09 PM, Amandeep Singh

very nicely written!
At September 20, 2007 at 6:46 PM, Jyoti

@ashu: Ji vekh liya tuhada blog vi asi..sannu bula ke tusi aap jaan diya gallan kar rahe ho?

@Prabhjeet: Thanks for your wonderful comment!

@Standbumind: Thanks buddy!
At September 21, 2007 at 5:38 AM, Anonymous

Hi,
Beautiful words...
At September 22, 2007 at 3:11 AM, Bla

Damn, I wish I knew the language.
At September 24, 2007 at 4:25 AM, Deepak

hey !!
where r u?
missing ur poems..... :)
post ur new poem yaar..
At September 25, 2007 at 12:06 AM, All Smiles!!

Awesome!! dil ko choonewaali poetry.. keep writing :)
At September 25, 2007 at 2:52 AM, Unknown

hey dats very well written n beautifully expressed!!

n thank u for stopping by n for d comment :)

u have a beautiful blog!
At September 26, 2007 at 9:34 PM, Mayank

Dekh lia maine bhi dekh lia wo kaun hai.....My heartiest congrats to you girl....Delhi mein kab darshan de rahi hain aap
At September 27, 2007 at 10:58 AM, Diksha

wah ! wah !!
bahut aachchha likhti ho aap.
At September 29, 2007 at 2:49 AM, Deepak

hey...first of all thn for "tarif" ( 16 sept. I me n myself)...n now let me do d same...ur blog's really nice ..all those poems...rockin...:)
At September 29, 2007 at 3:00 AM, Anonymous

Bahut achha laga janke, ki apko aapka saathi mil gaya, jiske bina aap aur ji nahi payenge....This is a beautiful gift of Love, just treasure it for your life & be happy always...Best Wishes!
At September 29, 2007 at 8:04 AM, relations

hey..

do write a poem in punjabi sometime..
At October 8, 2007 at 12:23 AM, fursat

Kya pyaar se bhari huee kavita hain. Hum toh bas yehi kahenge ke Khuda karein aap bahut lambi umar jeeyein... :-)
At October 10, 2007 at 3:04 AM, Life

wah wah kya baatein hai!!!!!!

so apne bhi pyaar ka swaad chak hi liya !!!! :)

isnt it gr8 feeling to be in love ????

Nice expression!!!!!!

I am back after Long time

Take Care
Vikas{v}
At October 10, 2007 at 10:36 PM, Jyoti

THANKS ALL !!!!

THANKS FOR BEING PART OF MY HAPPINESS!!!!!
At October 12, 2007 at 5:16 AM, DIL PE mAT lE yAAR

Hi jyoti.........congratulation for supper smart boy friend or hamsafer......

I think u r also prity beacuse i dont see u ................

I like your poem and painting today i visit ur block.....take care.....
At October 12, 2007 at 9:20 PM, Unknown

maine aapki mostly poems padhi....those are really nice...:)
jyoti bahut dino se aapne post nahi ki....
one of my frnd give me this blog few days before....i wanna say thnx to him also.....(thnx DD)..:D
At October 14, 2007 at 7:07 PM, Pritika Gupta

wow!! truely defined feeling of love...
At November 15, 2007 at 9:44 PM, hope

arey madam,

khushi ka gubbara(baloon) bankar aasmaan mei uad gayi kya???

kaha gayab?