woh shaam, jab akhri baar milne ka dar tha
samay ki iradon ru ba ru hone ka waqt tha
na jane kyun dil mein kuch mehsus sa ho raha tha
koi ankaha anjana sa rishtan dilon mein panap raha tha
na koi wajah, na hi thi koi chahat
par sath unka le aayi hothon pe muskurahat
intezar karaya, par azeez tha woh waqt
pehara tha is samaj ke usulon ka
par zor kab chala hai,dil pe kisi niyamon ka
pahiyon ki raftar ke sath chale hum kuch door
pani thi na koi manzil,bas hum to yuhi chale huzoor
na jane kya tha unhe kehna
na hi chaha tha humne kuch sunana
pal do pal ki khushiyon ke liye
sath chale kuch door hum ek duje ke liye
is ankahe anjane se rishten ko kya mein naam dun
lagta hai dar kisi mod par use kho na dun
socha batau unhe ki kya dil mein hai jagah unki
par kaise piroyun mein ladi lafazon ki
hum keh na sake,shayad woh samajh kar bhi khamosh rahe
dil ke in darmiyaano ko hum dono hi bhar na sake
chale hum apne apne dagar, badhe apni manil ki or
bina kuch izhaar kiye, thame ek duje ke ehsaas ki dor
rehne dete yun hi, is ankahe,ulajhe hue rishte ko
bina diye koi naam,jee le ne do is azeez ehsas bhare pyar ko!
kuch bikhareein ehsaas
Saturday, June 23, 2007
Ise kya naam dun????
posted by Jyoti at 1:37 PM
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At June 27, 2007 at 11:41 PM,
LifeAai mere sapno ki Rani
Kya tu bhi hai meri diwani
Main toh hu tera dewana
Teri sooch mein nahi rehta thikana
Dhoondta rehta hu bahana
Phir bhi tu nahi aati meri jana
Meri jaan mere dil mein zara jhak kar toh dhekh
Mere dil mein hai tere pyar ki murat ek
Murat jise chahata hu main itna
Use pata hi nahi utna
Chaha hai jise chahat se jyada
Samjha hai jise apne aap se zyada
Yeh main janta hu ya dil janta hai
Aah meri jaan mera saab kuch tu apna kar le
Bas mujhe apni baahon mein bhar le
Tera liye main kuch bhi ho sakta hu
Par mere liye tu woh hai
Jiske liya main dil-o-zigar jaan de sakta hu
Tu kahe to saans lena chod sakta hu
Bas mere sapno ki duniya se bahar aaja
Aur meri asliyat ki duniya mein aake
Meri baahon mein shama ja
liked ur poetry ..its very touching ....is this ur status right now ???
Welcome to my blog and thanks for the wishes :)
Take Care
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At July 12, 2007 at 11:34 PM,
soumya mukerjiBeautiful blog, I must say... I mean I've never really ventured into the world of vernacular blogging... but as I said, a beautiful blog with a beautiful name, as beautiful as 'Kalakaariyian'(forgive my overuse of a certain word, but I'm in the habit of using the most apt adjective, even if repeated... esp in case of writing and art)
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At July 19, 2007 at 3:00 AM,
Unknownnice poems....it is called true friendship....:)
किसी ने पूछा दोस्त क्या है ?
मैने काँटो पैर चल कर बता दिया
कितना प्यार करोगे दोस्त को?
मैने पूरा आसमान दिखा दिया
कैसे रखोगे दोस्त को?
मैने हल्के से फूलों को सेहला दिया
किसी की नज़र लग गयी तो ?
मैने पल्को में उस को चुपा लिया
जान से भी प्यारा दोस्त किसे केहते हो ?
मैने आपका नाम बता दिया
thnx
Blessings:
I liked your poem on friendship. I invite you to visit and explore "Ancient's History". I have some poetry, short stories, philosophy, and the Art of Wire-Treemaking.
"To give a person a tree is to give them a present...But to teach a person how to make a tree is a GIFT for life."
your humble servant,
ancient clown