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Name: Jyoti
From: Ludhiana, Punjab, India
About me: painting the ideas on canvas, sharing views through poems, embriodery on cloth with different threads, sometimes short tempered, very talkative, quite ambitious, like to dream high, love to read about different people...in short a a girl with a broad smile who is passionate to live a life with a difference.
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Friday, March 28, 2008

ek baar phir se...

Purane raste, naye tarike
seekha hai sambhalna, baar baar girke,
kori nigahein,bikhrein hue panne
kore hai kajaz, kya likhu unpe

chal e musaphir, is dagar pe
chal badh, kadam badha
zara manzil se dooriyan ghata
choone khushiyon ka jahan,
chal chale ek baar phir se _...

posted by Jyoti at 4:46 AM

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19 Comments:

At March 28, 2008 at 6:17 AM, Huh? Where am I ?

atti sundar...
aapko rasta bhi pata hai and manzil bhi.... gir ke sambhalna aap janti , to bas chalte jayea..!!
manzil and khushiyein dono kadmo main hogi... :)
keep patience..!
At March 28, 2008 at 10:55 PM, Ashish Soni

Subhaan allah...

Tum to bahut aacha likhti ho..

Keep it up...

Take care
~Ali
At March 29, 2008 at 6:45 AM, fursat

"...kori nigahein, bikhre huee panne..." wah kya kehna. Bahut achee panktiyan likhi hain aapne. Maan gayee Guru :-)
At March 30, 2008 at 2:46 AM, Alok

I love the feeling that it conjures .. It is so long that i have read something like this ... wonderfully done

Alok
At March 31, 2008 at 5:14 AM, Jyoti

@story teller: Yeah! M all patient to see what life has stored for me :)

@ali: Bahut bahut shukriya janab

@ricky: there are very few, who could relate the meanings to it. Thanks :)

@alok:this poem just an echo of moment when we need to push ourself to work harder when nothing seems to be moving :)
At March 31, 2008 at 9:15 AM, Deepak

thanks.. !
i think m came here before .. m i na?
its okay :)
At March 31, 2008 at 12:28 PM, Varun

sooo jaa munni....
At March 31, 2008 at 12:36 PM, Ashish Soni

bio-data nikaala jaa raha hai kya??
At March 31, 2008 at 1:13 PM, Jyoti

@Varun: Excuse me...i dont know you
At April 1, 2008 at 12:27 AM, fursat

I don't know if I understand the lines completely but they sounded beautiful :-)
At April 2, 2008 at 6:49 AM, Ye manzilen !!

:)
At April 3, 2008 at 5:37 AM, freesherry

hey!
I am sherry and I have started a picture deication thread an my blog

impressionist has dedicated a picture and a message to you at
http://sherryrowl.blogspot.com/2008/03/say-it-with-pictures.html

he is waiting for your reply
take care
At April 4, 2008 at 2:59 AM, Jyoti

@ricky: aha!
At April 4, 2008 at 3:00 AM, Jyoti

@ye manzilen!!: :))
At April 4, 2008 at 3:01 AM, Jyoti

@freesherry: I saw your link..have left comment over there.
At April 4, 2008 at 2:14 PM, ani

i really like ur blog... everything feels so heartfelt! :)
At April 5, 2008 at 9:58 PM, Jyoti

@ani:Even your views are heartfelt ;) Thanks
At April 6, 2008 at 6:01 AM, Huh? Where am I ?

I`m in search of a of good title name... as u having a good experiance of blogging so plzzz suggest me one..!!
some uinque and attractive type.. :)
At June 10, 2008 at 6:28 AM, ishqia

wow u really write good..

i really cannot write on such topics.. 99% of my poems are on romance..