At May 20, 2008 at 11:25 PM, Ashish Soni
@ jyoti
Kadiyaan means links... :P and not chain ... :)
...like...
"Pichali kadi main aapne dekhaa..."
....remember from those saas-bahu serials....
Okay, criticism apart....
The poem is nice and flowing...
and it looks like tazaa taazaa dil toota hai.....is it?
or it's just imagination at work..
I was in the same shoes two years back....spoiled my entire semester....still at times those old thoughts come back to haunt me.
u will have to help me out with two words here ... chiten and kadiyaan .....
except for those two words I could understand the rest of the poem and can comment on that subject to the two words mentioned above :)
"man banaye hai yaad karane ke laakho bahane" - is something that I do ... almost every time and hence can relate to it ... hamesha bahane dhoondhta rehta hoon ... this reminds me I am living alone for over 4 yrs now :) ...
"karun kaise dil-e-nazame bayan" had such a gazal like feel to it .. padhte hi daad dena ka mann karta hai :)
loved it!
Alok