Sunday, April 6, 2008
tanha

tanha ho gaye din, fir laute wahi khali pal
jinse bhaga karte the, wahi sathi hai ajkal

suni hai chandani, khali hai asman
rusawa hai aahein, doori banayen hai bahein
kho gaye woh raste, choot gayi woh rahein
na jane kahan simat gaya woh jahan

kasoor na kisi ka hai,
yeh to bas dastoor is duniya ka hai
ki pa kar bhi na kuch mila hai
aur na ab khone ko hi kuch bacha hai.

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posted by Jyoti at 6:10 AM ¤ Permalink ¤


12 Comments:


  • At April 6, 2008 at 12:51 PM, Blogger Huh? Where am I ?

    Oh! what is this Jyoti...
    you are not like that... as i don`t know u much but i ready ur previous post... m really surprised that how a girl who having always +ve thought now suddenly changed into -ve.... that is bad..now just cheer-up.... ups and-down are part of life...so just keep pateince and wait...
    hope to read ur good mood soon...

     

  • At April 6, 2008 at 1:09 PM, Blogger Huh? Where am I ?

    sorry..for commenting again...
    i recalled some lines.. i think u u will also like it..:-
    "Zindagi ek khatta meethe ehsaas hai
    jise chakhne ka sabka apna andaaz hai
    dekho to dukho ka bhandaar hai
    jaano to aahashon ka baazar hai
    "
    ummid karta hoon aapko rest line bhi yaad aa gayi hogi.. if not than just visit here... it is written by u only...
    http://weavedreamz.blogspot.com/2007/04/maine-jaana.html

     

  • At April 7, 2008 at 3:44 AM, Blogger Jyoti

    @huh? where am i?: it was just momentary expression, sometime situation just crosses boundary of patience one can keep.

    No, need to be sorry for writting comments. Jitni marzi baar likho ;)
    btw, it was nice to know that somebody did research on my blog :)
    goood..goood ..bas jo bhi padho unpe comment zarur likhna.

    At leaast i should also know that, who all in list of my blog's fan ;p

     

  • At April 7, 2008 at 6:13 AM, Blogger Lakshmi

    nicely written..evocative ..

     

  • At April 7, 2008 at 9:30 AM, Blogger Alok

    I hope woh momentary phase bhag gaya ... shld have already ... am sure ... rem when u have lost everything ... and you have nothing else to gain .... you still run the risk of loosing the right to gain ... do I make sense ... I guess not :)


    Alok

     

  • At April 7, 2008 at 8:46 PM, Blogger Canary

    Thanx for dropping by at my blog.. this poem is short yet deep, makes me think.. :) nice..

     

  • At April 7, 2008 at 11:52 PM, Blogger Jyoti

    @backpakker: thankyou madam :)

    @alok: *wink* *wink* even I couldn't get the meaning out of that. Yes..that phase is over. :)

    @canary: So, it made you to think..but what??? ;:)

     

  • At April 8, 2008 at 3:05 AM, Blogger Ashish Soni

    The flow of emotions in your short poem is really nice...


    take care
    ~Ali

     

  • At April 8, 2008 at 8:57 AM, Blogger Deepak

    hmm, what a poignant line !!
    waise kahte hain na? toofan se pahle ki khamoshi.... shayad yahi hai. khushiyon ke aane ke theek pahle aisa hi hota.. so thora sabr kijye sab theek hi hoga..:)

     

  • At May 3, 2008 at 4:53 AM, Blogger How do we know

    i like the way u have mixed the graphic with the poem..

     

  • At May 17, 2008 at 11:31 AM, Blogger Ye manzilen !!

    KIYA HUA? ye mayusi kiyoon?

     

  • At June 10, 2008 at 6:26 AM, Blogger ishqia

    very beautiful

     
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