"girte girte ankhon mein tham gayi" to "palo ko ek baar fir khushnuma kar" - the transition from tears to a blisful moment in so few words is amazing ... I hope I read the tears part correct ...

This had such a good feel to it ... lovely


Alok

Jyoti,

I understand from ALok, its a nice poem. I am not too good in hindi.

@rohit: Beware, else you will get one more sandle to add on top of your blog.

It was not woth keeping, thats why I deleted your comment.

@alok: You have not only read it correctly, but also understood it too in perfect sense i have tried to depict the moments.

Thanks a pile.

@priya: no props, I will translate it for you.

hmmmmmm..so meaning these lines are...:):)

nice poem jyoti..it really is classic..short and sweet..!!!

Well..ur both the bllogs are amazing...do update more on ur painting blog..i just love that blog...

wah....sweet poem.. :)

really nice