Jyoti,

I wish I get the whole words right but only few girl. U talk about someones life who tries to express or say something huh. Am I that close no?

ok nice poem there..
beautifully expressed..
the life of a tree right..

:):):)...a beautiful message that you are trying to pass thru this poem..by taking an example of tree....very few people can do that and you are one of them...
wonderfully xpressed...:):) a round of applause for u..from my side..i liked it:):)

ah! this is profound ... I loved the layers put into this .. and ofcourse the analogy :)


Alok

duh!

-I

one can learn so much abt life from tree.

never give up in life, so true!

well written....:)

hey jyoti..

very well said..intresting and put up properly...i loved it

@priya: sorry priya, I couldn't get what you actually meant to say.

This poem is just about a leafless tree which was near the over-bridge on the way to my college, I could see it even today after 3 yrs. I felt like writting about it, so i did that. Nothing more than that :)

Thanks for your visit.

@ishqia: thanks sweet girl.

@preetisoni: Thanks for these wonderful words.

@alok:this was nothing in front of your write ups.

But, thanks for your appreciation

impressionist: hud ;p

kp!: thanks buddy.

idrish: thanks a ton boy :)

Somehow it reminds me of a tele-serial that aired on Doordarshan long time back. The story in that serial was told through the eyes of the tree that had stood the test of time. Interesting perspective...isn't it?

OOpsy:)

Thanks for letting me know.

well written..!
'neem ka ped' to nahi ??

kya baat hai....

Kuch kehta hai woh...

Mujhe laga ki office ka peon hai :P

but nicely written...
after reading the first 2 paras i got the idea that you are talking about a tree...

@ricky: well, m unaware of any tele-series. Thanks for dropping by.

@priya: :)

@hmi?: nah.. :)

@ali: lol..i know you are intelligent